First draft of werewolf / vampire romance e-book is almost done

Well, I’m almost done with the first draft of Hunter’s Moon, the next Vampires Realm story and a werewolf / vampire romance e-book. In the end, I think it’s going to turn out closer to the 50,000 word mark than 40,000. It was originally supposed to be 30,000 but the plot developed a little as I started writing it and I’m happy with the growth. I think the book supports it. It’s quite an emotional story, but has action too.

I have around 4 chapters to write. I’m currently on 35,423 words and I’m in the middle of a love scene. It’s the all important first time for the hero (a werewolf named Nicolae) and the heroine (a vampire of the Nocens bloodline called Tatyana). Of course, having to write a love scene first thing on a Monday morning isn’t exactly conducive to getting plenty of words written. Progress was a bit slow, but I managed around 1000 words… somehow. That’s half of my normal word count for the morning. Hopefully I’ll be able to get into the love scene at lunch time and get it written. After that, there’s a lot of action, and some biting to write. Yum!

I should probably finish the first draft by Wednesday evening. I hope I do as I have to proof a non-Vampires Realm story, Her Warrior Angel, and get it ready for going on sale on November 20th.

Will post an update when I’m done with Hunter’s Moon.

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Let the Right One in… do we really need an American remake?

I recently watched Let the Right One in and was talking about it to a fellow film enthusiast at work. To my horror, he informed me that there was now an American remake of the film–Let Me In. Now, don’t get me wrong, I have nothing against Americans, but I don’t understand why there is a deep-seated need in Hollywood to remake any good film that happened to be made outside the US and happened to do well.

Let the Right One in is a brilliant, beautiful movie, full of atmosphere and innocence tainted with bloodshed. It was balanced, the story and plot were well done and well executed, and it didn’t need to be remade. It’s barely a few years old. There was no need for this remake to happen, and I can only be certain that some of the beauty and feeling in the original film/book is going to be lost in translation as it travels across the pond to be covered in Hollywood glitz.

I have seen numerous films suffer from the desire for everything to be set in America/be not subtitled. The Seven Samurai, Zatoichi, Ju-on, Ringu, all brilliant Japanese films that have been remade to fit American audiences when they should have just let everyone see and appreciate the originals.

So what if you have to read subtitles to follow the film. It really doesn’t make viewing the film difficult. I do it all the time with Japanese / Hong Kong films/anime and it’s no bother at all (Oh, which reminds me, you all know that The Departed is a remake of the excellent Hong Kong film, Infernal Affairs, right?)

Let the Right One in had a brilliant world-film feel about it. It was a simple but deep plot, with scenes that followed the daily actions of a young lonely boy and a young-looking vampire without fuss or overcomplicating them. They spoke for themselves, standing out and creating a film that really did strike me as something amazing.

To me, it had an air about it that reminded me of Night Watch. That film really had an impact on me visually, and the plot was good enough to make it an entertaining film. Day Watch was poor in comparison. The intervention by big foreign movie companies ruined what could have been a great follow up to the first film, turning it into a farce. They even wanted to film it in English!

Really, can the big screenwriters not think of their own original stories to write. Do we have to remake everything?

Cinema seems to be going through some sort of remake hell right now. There are films that are barely a few years old that are getting remade… and don’t get me started on remaking classics like Clash of the Titans! (and killing the most important part of the plot while they’re at it!)

End Rant!

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Hunter’s Moon – update on my new vampire / werewolf romance book

I’m making some good progress with the first draft of my new vampire / werewolf romance book, Hunter’s Moon. It’s the next Vampires Realm story, so I’ve been blogging about it over at my Vampires Realm blog.

If you want to read all about Hunter’s Moon, check out my latest post: http://bit.ly/9wGete

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Valemont – vampire television at its worst

I have a very open mind and heart when it comes to vampires. My love for them is deep and eternal enough that I just couldn’t resist giving Valemont a chance to improve in the final episode. There had to be a chance they could finally get it right, fix the horrific plot imbalances, and come through to snatch victory with a capital V for Valemont.

Unfortunately not.

Christian Taylor (middle) the writer of Valemont with the cast – the man to blame for this horror. Dillon Casey (half-naked) is the best thing about it!

The final episode of Valemont thankfully didn’t end with the death of everyone. Sebastian van Cleer, vampire, survives a sword through the chest (points for keeping the vampire hero alive), the bad guy dies (although since Sebastian survives a worse sword wound, his death is debatable — points deducted for this oversight), and the poorly named Gabriel (points also deducted for using such a cliche name) also survives… not sure what he is. Human I think.

The writing on Valemont hasn’t improved. It’s poor, the plot is so weak that it hurts, and there’s still a shocking lack of emotion. I’m still trying to get over the previous few episodes’ complete disregard for relationship building. Sophie, the heroine, goes from kinda liking Sebastian, to using him to get his key to the Panthera house, to hating him and wanting nothing to do with him… and then… once she too becomes a vampire and is told that pure bloods like her can’t get it on / can’t marry another pure blood like Sebastian, she has a massive weepy tizzy about it in his face, asking him why he never told her that they couldn’t be together. I was like – WTF? – since she had shown NO true emotional interest in the guy and suddenly she was acting as though she was madly in love with him and devastated. Honestly, you’ve got to at least reveal some emotion / her feelings in previous scenes to back up such a bombshell otherwise it just doesn’t work.

The camera work and shoddy sound didn’t improve in this episode. Soft focus was met with blur and sound that fluctuated in volume so badly I had to ride the volume on the remote through the entire episode. It was painful to watch and gave me no reason to connect to it at all. Valemont screams of wannabe and fails dismally to capture this audience and make me give a damn about the characters. The sad thing is, I’m left with the feeling that it could have been so much more. If the writing had been refined, or written by someone else perhaps, or the writer had done his research better about the field he was entering into rather than rushing to leap on the bandwagon, it could have been great. I’m bitterly disappointed and I’m desperately hoping that MTV let this one die a peaceful death and don’t ressurect it for a second series. It’s not even worth it to see more of Dillon Casey!

Although, when Sebastian is supposedly killed, the heroine Sophie has a short weepy moment and then after the grand finale, she doesn’t seem to give a monkey that she’s standing in the same room as his dead body, and that of her brother. If she cared about the vampire hottie, surely she would have returned to his side post-fight? Bitch.

If they do insist on making a second series of Valemont, MTV needs to get a new writer, one that doesn’t come across as though it’s the first thing he’s ever written and didn’t bother to revise it before turning it into a trashy series. I’m available if you want a vampire series with bite and emotion, and a plot that makes sense… although I would have to fire your camera and sound crew.

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Raine Delight – Devon Falls Series – Guest Blogger

I have the lovely Raine Delight with me again today, this time talking about her ongoing Devon Falls series. So without further ado…

Welcome to Devon Falls, a little town that loves paranormal and romance. I created Devon Falls as a town where love and fate collide with paranormal creatures that we read about daily. From shifters of all kinds to dream walkers, all paranormal are welcome in Devon Falls. When I began writing about Devon Falls, I was never anticipating the response readers gave me overall on it. They clamored for more books on the people there and many have said they want to know where it is to visit. *grins* Hate to say it, Devon Falls is all my imagination but the people there welcome you whenever you open one of the books.

The official introduction to Devon Falls found in most of the books in the beginning is this:

Welcome to Devon Falls, founded in 1784 by the four founding families with one goal: to find a place where they can live without the threat of their “special” gifts coming to light. The Stevens families were master bakers from France and had an affinity to magic, the Dracon families ran a hotel in London and were shape shifters of varying degrees, Sinclair family mastered the art of building in Germany and were able to dream walk, and the Craven family were master musicians from Russia and were able to manipulate the elements. Each family contributed something different and with each family’s gift, they soon found the freedom and contentment in the new town they called Devon Falls. As the years went by, each family grew and expanded and soon love gave way to some very special matches every few centuries. Now the time has come again in Devon Falls as this year some very special people find their path to love, passion and a blinding romance that will leave them breathless.


Welcome to Devon Falls and be amazed at the love that finds some of the most unlikely of people.

Each Devon Falls book except the last one is centered on a holiday. The books are stand alone but loosely connected either thru plot or characters. I recommend reading them in order to understand recurring characters and how they are entwined with each other. I also decided that each book gives a little hint of what the next one may be about main character wise. *grins* I want readers’ to try to figure out who may be in the “hot seat” next.

The series goes as follows:
Sticky Magic (Book 1) ~ Christmas Theme (Main Characters- Jenna Stevens and Marc Du Bree)
Red Hot Magic (Book 2) ~ Valentine’s Day (Main Characters: Raven Demarco & Jean-Claude LaFever)
Fiery Magic (Book 3) ~ 4th of July (Main Characters- Alicia Stevens and Damien Dracon)
Haunting Magic (Book 4) ~ Halloween (Main Character-Jaxon Sinclair and Rodrick Dracon)

Upcoming Devon Falls books:
Moonlight & Magic – Valentine’s Day (Main Characters- Dixie Stevens and Michael Barnes) Release TBD
Yuletide Magic -Winter Solstice/Christmas (Main Characters: Grady O’Neil and Mandy Alexander) Release date TBA
Elemental Magic Trilogy will finally end the series with a total of 10 books in total. We will meet the elemental mage family, The Cravens, in Moonlight & Magic and Yuletide Magic. I anticipate these will be out in 2012 and suggest you follow my blog or facebook page to get sneak peeks and other news on my work.

All of Devon Falls books are through Aspen Mountain Press and you can find them at Amazon Kindle, All Romance Ebooks, 1PlaceforRomance (formerly 1romance) and Fictionwise.

Devon Falls 1: Sticky Magic
A chance meeting at a sweet shop… Can it be love?

When a stranger stops in at her shop, Jenna is surprised by the immediate attraction.  Apparently, Marc is too because he wants to get to know Jenna.  A whole lot better and won’t take no for an answer.

Also available in Babes in Toyland II Anthology and as a stand alone title
Buy at: Aspen Mountain Press

Devon Falls 2: Red Hot Magic
A candy maker is set up by her business partner at a charity animal auction.

With the help of a charity fundraiser, Jenna sets her friend, Raven, up to find Mr. Perfect.  Raven though, has found Mr. Perfect…in her dreams. Now, if she could only find the sexy man in real life.

Buy at: Aspen Mountain Press

Devon Falls 3: Fiery Magic
The mistakes of the past collide explosively in Devon Falls.

Damien Dracon is back in Devon Falls, and he is about to woo the one lady he left three years ago. Family secrets and youthful pride forced him to give up the one good thing in his life: the love of Alicia Stevens. What he doesn’t expect is that Alicia has a secret of her own, and it may just tear them apart. Can two former lovers find it in themselves to forgive one another and let love grow between them? Or will past secrets haunt them and tear them apart? This 4th of July is about to get explosive in Devon Falls.

Buy at: Aspen Mountain Press

Devon Falls 4: Haunting Magic
A werewolf claims his mate in Devon Falls.

Rodrick Dracon is the twin heir to the Dragon Inn. When he finds himself longing for a mate after being footloose and fancy free, he finds himself drawn to the most obnoxious, brassy woman he has ever met: Jaxon Sinclair. She is the one woman who doesn’t melt when he goes by or hangs on his every word. She is just aggravating and down right sexy as sin! Soon the sparks fly, passion goes into boiling and Halloween approaches. Can a wolf shifter get this woman to heel before the full moon? Or can Jax turn the tables on this ladies man and tame the wolf?

A recommended read at Dark Divas Reviews and my first best seller.

Buy now at: Aspen Mountain Press

Thank you so much for coming to talk to use about your Devon Falls series today Raine! It’s been a pleasure.

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Hunter’s Moon – progress made on the new Vampires Realm story

I finally have a new Vampires Realm story in progress. Hunter’s Moon is a paranormal werewolf / vampire romance book that will probably turn out to be around 40,000 words or possibly a bit longer. It’s difficult to judge with this one. At the moment, I’m 12,000 words in and finally in the heroine’s POV. It’s taken three chapters to reach her because she’s been rather worse for wear / close to death so we’ve been with the hero through his process of finding her, taking her back to his cabin, and patching her up. Of course, he’s a little reluctant to help her once he realises that she’s a vampire. Werewolves get a bit cranky about that sort of thing.

If you want to read more about it, I’m posting about it at my Vampires Realm blog:

http://vampiresrealm.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-vampires-realm-story-in-progress.html

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Valemont – MTV vampire television series

So, the DH saw that Valemont was on MTV and stuck it in the planner for me. I watched a bit of it this morning, and it isn’t really grabbing me. It’s a touch cliche in the story line and I just get that vibe that I’m watching a poorly made live action (although plot-wise it’s a bit different) version of Vampire Knight (anime). There are SO many vampire animes and series out there right now that centre around vampires at a school / academy / university (delete as appropriate). None of them have bested Vampire Knight yet though.

Here’s my rambling thoughts about Valemont… a not so great vampire series.

Sebastian Van Cleer – the best thing in Valemont

There’s nothing really new for me in Valemont. It’s a bit more interesting than Vampire Diaries, since there’s a whole forbidden love thing going on between leading lady Sophie and sexy vampire bad boy Sebastian, but the shambolic sound and rather clunky camera work on it really takes away too much for me to be continuing with it. I get that vibe that nothing much is going to happen. It switches and changes by degrees every five seconds, so that it’s no longer cohesive. You get a sort of headache trying to keep up. Honestly, stick with the characters/scene for more than a second or two, please! It could have been really good, with stronger writing and better sound/camera work, and more intense/longer scenes. Also, I don’t feel any emotional connection or any feeling towards the characters. Sophie has love interests thrown at her all the time, and Sebastian clearly wants to get it on, but she’s not letting that happen… and when he does kiss her, it’s not exactly mindblowing passion you’re watching on the tv. You just can’t get a feel for the characters, their emotions/feelings towards the rest of the characters, and it sort of all falls flat.

I also get the feeling that they’re gonna kill off all the leading men – Sebastian (a vampire) and Gabriel (presumably human), and that just does not float my boat. Although, if you’re gonna kill anyone, kill Gabriel. Never kill off a sexy vampire!

Might have to ditch this in favour of keeping up with Vampire Diaries. At least that’s better produced, better written, and is a little more unique, although also full of cliches.

The vampires in Valemont are pretty standard. Nothing that hasn’t particularly been done before. The most interesting is that there are five different types of vampires, although I can’t see how a bat biting an animal can then lead to a human being a vampire.

Vampires procreate in this, and age and then mature into their true vampy state. Been there and written that (wait for my future novels that I’m in edits with – Forbidden Blood and Heart of Darkness – and you’ll see what I mean)

Human blood is pretty much like a drug to them (again, wait for Forbidden Blood, same sort of theory)

There’s some sort of rebellion about to begin against the law against drinking human blood… nothing amazingly new about that. If I was a vampire and had to lay of the human blood, I’d be pretty pissed too. Although, in this, human blood is supposed to shorten their life-span and make their true vampire abilities / issues show. Such as sunlight affecting them. I love seeing how people get around the sunlight issue. Vampire Diaries has it done the best way so far for a telly series, although ripping off Buffy the Vampire Slayer with the whole ring thing wasn’t their most imaginative move. Most of the time I deal with it a different way in each of my books, but do like to fall back on the – owie, that’s gonna smart – approach to sunlight.

Has anyone else watched Valemont and liked it?

Right now, I’m eager to re-watch Vampire Knight to erase Valemont from my mind (subbed version of course. I don’t watch dubbed anime)

Valemont… you could have been so much more… you had the looks… but unfortunately, the production sucked (hahaha I made a funny!)

ETA – This is the sort of picture I had wanted to include of Dillon Casey, who plays Sebastian!

Now, that’s hero material right there… he does get his kit off a bit in Valemont. Apparently it’s a bit of a trend for the poor guy.

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Her Fallen Angel – paranormal angel romance e-book out now!

Her Fallen Angel is out now at my website, Amazon.com, Amazon.co.uk, Alinar Publishing and Fictionwise (where you can save 15% off the cover price until monday)

Her Fallen Angel
Annelie fell for Lukas the moment he walked into her pub three years ago. He’s stunning, his vivid green eyes lending to his otherworldly beauty, but he’s seriously out of her league. When he tells her that she’s beautiful and confesses that he wants her, she can’t resist him and his passionate kiss. She unleashes her desire and seizes the moment and Lukas with both hands. But Lukas has a secret, one that will test Annelie’s love for him and threaten to tear them apart.

He’s an angel.

Annelie can’t believe it when Lukas says that their feelings for each other aren’t a sin, but she can believe his pain when he tells her the reason he’s on Earth. He is fallen, cast out of Heaven as punishment for a crime he didn’t commit. Lukas isn’t about to give up and accept his fate though. He’s determined to prove both his innocence and his love for Annelie, and to show her that the intense passion they share is real.

When Lukas and Apollyon discover who framed him, will he be able to stop them from going after Serenity and Annelie? Will he be able to protect the woman he loves and fly away with her into their forever after?

ALL OF THE STORIES IN THE HER ANGEL SERIES STAND ALONE, JOINED BY CHARACTER AND WORLD ONLY, AND DO NOT NEED TO BE READ IN ORDER.

ebook price: $2.99
genre: paranormal angel romance
length: 30000 words
rating: sultry
released: October 2010
Book 2 in the Her Angel series

available now at:
My website: http://www.felicityheaton.com/ebooks.php?title=Her%20Fallen%20Angel
Alinar Publishing: http://www.alinarpublishing.com/books.php?title=Her%20Fallen%20Angel
Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/Her-Fallen-Angel-Romance-ebook/dp/B0046ZRNEG/
Amazon Kindle UK: http://www.amazon.co.uk/Her-Fallen-Angel-Romance/dp/B0046ZRNEG/
Fictionwise.com: http://www.fictionwise.com/ebooks/b114586/Her-Fallen-Angel-/Felicity-Heaton/?

EXCERPT
Lukas was looking worse for wear.

Annelie had never seen him drink alcohol. She had often wondered why he came to her pub but stuck to soft drinks. Seeing him slowly sliding down towards the bar, his head propped up on his hand and his eyes closed, she was no longer surprised that he lay off the booze. He couldn’t handle it.

His scruffy sandy locks fell forwards when his head slipped from his hand and he jerked up. He rolled his eyes a few times while blinking and then pulled a face as he inspected the damp elbow of his black shirt and the wet bar where he had been leaning. A sigh lifted his shoulders and he stared at the half-full glass of whisky in front of him. Perhaps she should have cut him off after his third, but his charming smile had persuaded her to supply him with a fourth, and a fifth. She regretted it now. At the time, he had looked as though he would be fine. Now, he looked as though he was going to pass out.

Perhaps she shouldn’t have given him the first shot. What if he didn’t drink because he was an alcoholic and she had just ruined his recovery? She could never live with herself if that was the case.

She handed some change to a patron and walked along the length of the dark wooden bar to Lukas, neatening her appearance as she did so. She tugged the hem of her back baby-doll t-shirt down to sit smoothly along the waist of her black jeans, and combed her fingers through her long red hair. She always felt as though she looked like a mess when things got frantic behind the bar, and she wanted to look her best for Lukas.

The pub was quieter now that it was approaching closing time. A few regulars remained along with a group of people she didn’t recognise that sat in the corner near the old bay windows. She could finally speak to Lukas without interruption.

Annelie leaned on the damp bar opposite Lukas and swept his fair hair out of his eyes. He leaned away, almost fell off his stool, and then looked at her. She felt an all too familiar jolt when his green eyes met her brown ones and her heart fluttered in her chest when he smiled lopsidedly.

“You okay?” She went to take her hand away but he took hold of it, bringing it down to the bar and toying with her fingers.

His gaze fell there, a look of fascination entering his eyes, and she told herself not to read into it.

So what if this was the first bordering-on-intimate contact they’d had? So what if he had made her heart stop the moment he had first walked into her pub three years ago and it had stopped every time she had seen him since? It didn’t mean anything.

At least, it didn’t mean anything to him.

Sure, they had talked and whiled away the hours, and Lukas was an amazing listener and always seemed genuinely interested in her problems and helping her solve them, but he had never once shown any interest in her beyond friendship.

She wished that he would.

He was drop dead gorgeous. Six feet plus of masculine beauty. And she wanted to pounce on him whenever he walked through the door.

Which had been almost every other night until recently.

He had gone away for three long weeks without a word, leaving her wondering if something terrible had happened to him. Then the moment he walked back into her life, he hit the drink, hard.

Lukas didn’t answer her. His green gaze remained fixed on her hand and he turned it this way and that, his hands warm and gentle against hers. Her heart whispered that this was interest beyond friendship.

Someone stepped up to the bar at the far end and she waved to Andy to serve him. She couldn’t leave Lukas until she knew what was going on in his head and why he was suddenly drinking, or at least until she was sure he wasn’t about to fall off his stool and hurt himself.

Annelie bent lower so she could see his face. His gaze finally left her hand and met hers again, bright in the lights from the rows of drinks behind her.

“I said you okay?” She searched his eyes.

His pupils were wide. He raked his gaze down over her chest, fire following in its wake, and then back up to her face. It remained fixed there, as though he was studying her, intense and focused. A blush crept onto her cheeks.

“Hell of a week.” His reply was so quiet that she barely heard him.

“You’ve been gone three.”

His eyebrows rose. “Three?”

She nodded. He released her hand and ran his over the messy finger-length strands of his hair, preening it back. He brought his hand down, pinched the bridge of his nose and screwed his eyes shut.

“Hell of a three weeks.” Lukas smiled but she saw straight through it.

Something was up. Andy tried to call her over but she waved him away again. Andy had been tending bar long enough to handle problems on his own now. Lukas needed to talk. She had seen it the moment he had sat down tonight, but the pub had been so busy that she hadn’t been able to talk to him other than taking his order. He had never really spoken much about himself and the one time he needed to she hadn’t made time for him. He had always made time to listen to her. What sort of friend was she?

“I was wondering where you were.” Her tone was jest but her heart meant the words.

Lukas looked at her as though hearing that had made his day and then dropped his gaze to his drink. He ran his finger around the rim of the whisky glass and then sighed.

“Sorry about that.”

She never had been able to place his accent. It wasn’t British. She had asked him about it once and he had simply said that he had lived in many places. She had told him her whole life story and he hadn’t even told her where he was from. She was fine with that though. It added a sense of mystery to him that she liked.

He picked up his glass and she took it from him.

“I think you’ve had enough of that.” She tipped the contents away behind the bar and stashed the glass there. “How are you getting home tonight?”

He frowned, propped his head up on his palm, and closed his eyes. “The usual way.”

“I can’t let you drive.”

A smile curved his delicious lips. “I don’t drive. I fly.”

She laughed. “Well, I can’t let you drink and fly.”

He was drunk if he thought he could fly home.

Annelie covered his other hand with hers and he opened his eyes, their green depths meeting hers again. They were sharper now but not enough to satisfy her.

“I’ll give you a lift if you wait until we’ve closed.” Hopefully he would have sobered up a little by then and could direct her to his place. She had never seen him outside work before.

He stared into her eyes for what felt like hours and then nodded. Annelie took her hand back and smiled, relieved that he would wait for her. She didn’t want him going home alone and perhaps she could talk to him during the drive and find out why he was suddenly drinking.

The bar would close in twenty minutes but it would be at least another hour before she had finished cleaning up. She glanced back at Lukas. He rested his arm on the counter and used it as a pillow, his eyes closing. He hadn’t drunk that much, but it was still best that he slept it off. Andy would go home when the pub closed and she would be quiet while she counted the money and cleaned the place.

Before long, the pub was empty except for her and Lukas. Annelie tied her long red hair back into a ponytail and wiped the bar down, avoiding disturbing Lukas as he slept. She stopped by him and stared at his face. He looked so peaceful and gorgeous when asleep. She hesitated and then, with her heart in her mouth, brushed the tangled strands of his fair hair from his forehead. His lips parted and he murmured something. She smiled and brushed his skin again, lightly so he wouldn’t wake, but enough contact to make her feel a little giddy. When had she fallen for him? It had come on so slowly over the past three years that she hadn’t realised she had those sorts of feelings for Lukas until he had gone away, and then she had been worried that he wasn’t coming back.

But here he was again, at her bar in the same stool he always occupied, and she was happy to see him.

Even if he was asleep.

He stirred and blinked slowly, as though trying to wake himself.

Annelie didn’t take her hand back. She was feeling brave tonight.

“How are you feeling?” She combed her fingers through his hair.

Lukas frowned, his green eyes fixed on the distance, and then groaned. She took that as a negative answer.

“No better yet?”

He nodded, moving her hand with him, and she stroked the curve of his ear. A smile touched his lips and then faded again when he closed his eyes.

“I’m almost done. I’ll have you home soon.” She went to walk away but he caught her wrist, sat up, and looked at her with such earnest eyes that her heart beat harder.

“I ever tell you that you’re pretty?” Those words rocked her to her core. Her pulse raced and her throat turned dry. She shook her head and he reached out with his other hand and ran the backs of his fingers down her cheek. There was nothing but honesty and warmth in his eyes. They sparkled with it, looking brighter now even though the lights were lower, entrancing her. “Your beauty puts angels to shame.”

Annelie tried to convince herself that it was the drink talking. Tried and failed. She had worked in pubs since she was in her early twenties, almost ten years ago, and had run this one since her parents had retired early. She had enough experience to spot levels of inebriation. Lukas’s eyes were sharper and his words weren’t slurred. He wasn’t drunk anymore. He was definitely still tipsy, but that excuse didn’t hold with her heart. It believed him. He really did think that she was beautiful. She blushed. It burned her cheeks before she could get the better of herself. She worked at a bar. She was used to men telling her that she was beautiful at the end of the night, but the way Lukas said it, the fact that it was him, made her believe him.

“You really are.” His hand slipped from her cheek to her jaw and he grazed his fingers along the curve of it. He smiled and her heart thudded. He was beautiful. She had never seen a man like him, with such deep green eyes and a smile that could make her heart pound and body tremble. “Beautiful.”

“Hush.” She took his hand away from her face and held it a moment. “Quit making me blush, Lukas.”

His smile held. “I love the way you say my name. Say it again.”

Annelie rolled her eyes. “Lukas.”

“Not like that.” He drew his hand towards him, luring her with it, until she was close to him. She stared into his eyes, her mind racing forwards to contemplate things it shouldn’t be. He wasn’t going to kiss her. Even if he was looking more sober now, she couldn’t let things go down that avenue. “Say it like you mean it. Like you said it just then.”

Annelie looked deep into his eyes, lost in them and the way the flecks of pale gold seemed to shift and move against their emerald backdrop, and blinked slowly. Her voice dropped to a whisper. “Lukas.”

“Mmm, that is more like it.” He pulled her closer and tilted his head.

Annelie broke free, pulse rocketing, and ignored the disappointed look on his face. She couldn’t kiss him, no matter how tempting it was.

“Let me finish cleaning and I’ll take you home.” She hurried away to the other end of the bar, not daring to look back at Lukas, not while she wanted to kiss him and was weak enough to go through with it.

By the time she had finished cleaning, Lukas was looking far more sober and he was watching her. Annelie could feel his eyes on her, following her around the room as she placed the chairs upside down on the tables. She would wash the floor in the morning before opening time.

She walked over to Lukas and he turned on the stool to face her. His eyes held fire that burned within her, enticing her to kiss him after all. She cleared her throat, averted her gaze, and nodded towards the door.

“Come on.” She didn’t wait for him to get down off the stool. She started towards the door and Lukas was soon beside her. She snuck a glance at him. He always looked good in the black shirt and jeans he wore. They hugged his figure just the right amount, giving subtle clues about how sexy the body they hid was and luring her into picturing him naked. Even when she shouldn’t be.

She closed the door behind him and locked up.

“You okay?” She pocketed her keys and started down the quiet dark road with him towards the car park at the back of the pub.

“I have been better.” He tilted his head back, staring up at the night sky, and sighed. There was such a look of melancholy in his eyes. What was he thinking?

“Where did you go, Lukas?” She took her car keys out of her pocket, turned the corner into the car park, and pressed the button on the fob. The lights on her small car flashed. “I really was worried about you.”

He stopped and looked at her. She turned and met his gaze, letting him see that she wasn’t just saying that. He had disappeared without a word and it had frightened her. She had missed him. He stepped up to her and touched her face again, his palm warm against her cheek. His eyes held hers and she swore she saw another flicker of affection in them.

“I had to go away. I should have told you, Annelie. I should not have worried you.” There was black magic in his voice and the way he said her name, soft but with an underlying note of passion, and she was under his spell. He stroked her cheek, sending a shiver through her, and smiled into her eyes. “I did not think I would be gone so long. I promise I will not do it again.”

Annelie told herself to break free but she couldn’t. She didn’t want to. She wanted to stand there in the warm night, feeling hot from head to toe because of Lukas’s caress and the ardent look in his eyes. She wanted to believe that his words meant what she thought they did and that he liked her and things between them would be different now. She hadn’t looked at another man since Lukas had walked into her life, had dreamed the impossible of him falling for her, and now it felt as though the impossible was possible after all.

Lukas wanted her as much as she wanted him.

She stepped into his embrace, her heart thundering against her chest, and stared up into his eyes. His fingers stroked her neck, his thumb brushing over her chin and then under her jaw. He tilted her head back, his eyes fixed on hers, and lowered his mouth. She shivered when their lips met and then pressed her hands against his firm chest and melted into him as he kissed her. It started out slow, a bare meeting of lips, but before she could draw another breath, his mouth covered hers and he stole it away.

It was everything that she had imagined it would be. She craned her neck, slid her arms around his shoulders, and kissed him, their lips meeting and parting, tongues tracing each other. He groaned and it was music to her heart, driving her on. She licked his lower lip, tangled her tongue with his, and kissed him harder, her breathing coming faster now.

Sense reared its ugly head but she shoved it away, not interested in anything her mind had to say on the matter. The kiss was divine. Lukas was divine. It didn’t matter that he was still a little tipsy and that they were kissing in the middle of an unpleasant car park. She knew in her heart that this wasn’t the drink talking.

He pulled back, breathing hard, and his eyes searched hers. The fire in them matched the inferno burning within her. Did she look so hungry too? She wanted to devour him.

“Annelie…” He started and looked as though he was going to kiss her again, but then he stepped back. “I am sorry. If I have offended—”

“No.”

His eyes darted to hers.

She couldn’t bring herself to say it. She wanted him too. She had wanted that kiss more than anything. She was on the brink of saying it but other words came out instead.

“We should get you home.”

He looked disappointed again and nodded. Annelie walked to her car, cursing herself, feeling Lukas trailing behind her. She was aching all over to feel his hands and lips on her again. Why couldn’t she have just said what she had wanted to? Lukas, it was fine that you kissed me because I want to do that to you and a lot more besides. It was so easy to say it in her head.

She walked around the car and glanced at him. His eyes were on her again, drifting over her body, bringing the fire back in their wake. She burned for him. She burned so much that she felt as though she was going to die if he didn’t touch her and kiss her again, if he didn’t quench the flames as only he could.

If she had said what she had wanted to, would he be kissing her again now? Would that divine body be against hers and his hands be on her, skimming over her in the way she was craving, bringing her to life with passion and need?

Annelie yanked the car door open and got in. Lukas slid into the passenger seat beside her and she started the engine, put the car into gear and drove. He was quiet, only giving her directions across London to where he lived. When they reached it, she pulled the car to a halt in a space outside and stared at the building. It was a beautiful pale Georgian four-storey townhouse.

“You live here?” She couldn’t quite bring herself to believe it. She had never figured Lukas for a moneyed type. He had never once looked as though he had more than a few hundred pounds to his name.

Lukas nodded and got out of the car, not waiting for her. Had she put him in a bad mood? Her eyes followed him. He was walking in a straight line, not wavering at all, and seemed sober now. If he kissed her again, she wouldn’t be able to resist him anymore. She wouldn’t have a reason to.

Annelie stepped out, locked her car, and hurried across the quiet road to him. He waited at the black front door of the building, his gaze on her again. She stopped at the bottom of the steps, waiting for him to say something. All he had to do was invite her in. If he invited her in, she would take it as a sign that she hadn’t messed anything up and that he still wanted her.

His eyes held hers for what felt like hours and then he spoke.

“I just want to be clear about one thing. I did not kiss you because of the drink.” He glanced away and then met her gaze again. “There is a reason I like to sit at the bar and talk to you, Annelie. There is a reason I kissed you.”

He looked as though he had wanted to say more but she didn’t give him a chance. She ran up the steps, threw her arms around his neck and kissed him again. He stumbled backwards into the door and wrapped his arms around her waist, his tongue delving into her mouth and duelling with hers. This was Heaven. She couldn’t hold in her moan.

Lukas fumbled with the door behind him and they fell into the entrance, still locked in each other’s arms, their mouths fused in a kiss that drove Annelie crazy with hunger. She moaned again and kissed him harder, pouring out her passion and need into it until it became choppy and rough, a clashing of lips and teeth. Lukas’s groan sent a wave of heat scorching through her and she gasped into his mouth when he grabbed her backside. She hopped and wrapped her legs around his waist and he hit the wall with her, pinning her there, his body hard against hers and making her tremble with the images of them that flashed through her mind. She wanted all of them to happen right now, this instant, wanted to live out every hot dream she’d had of Lukas.

“Which floor?” She managed between kisses, too hungry for him to break contact for more than a second.

“Fourth.” There was a laugh to his voice that brought out her smile. He kissed her again and turned with her, heading for the stairs. Was he serious? He couldn’t carry her all the way to the fourth floor while kissing her.

Lukas seemed intent on proving her wrong. He held on to her, his hands grasping her backside, his body shifting between her hips in the most delicious way, and kissed along her jaw as he took the steps two at a time.

Annelie didn’t pay the slightest bit of attention to her surroundings. All she could think about was what would happen when they reached his apartment and how good it felt to be in his arms. She kissed his throat, earning quiet moans from him whenever she nipped it with her teeth or sucked. The rougher she was, the louder he groaned, and it drove her on, making her want to bite him harder.

She wriggled against him, hot all over, moist in her knickers, and moaned when he nibbled her neck, kissing and licking it, sending shivers dancing over her skin and stoking the fire of her hunger for him. She leaned her head back and he held her closer, devouring her throat, taking her higher and higher, and not only towards his apartment.

“Almost there,” he whispered into her mouth and her temperature soared with anticipation. He kissed her throat, her cheeks, and then her lips. He paused there and said the one thing that shattered her reservations, the one thing she had wanted to hear above all else. He breathed it against her lips in a husky voice, turning three simple words into the most erotic thing she had ever heard. “I want you.”

Annelie trembled in his strong arms, swept away by her need and his passion, and she kissed him.

She wanted him too.

And she was damn well going to have him.

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Her Fallen Angel
Annelie fell for Lukas the moment he walked into her pub three years ago. He’s stunning, his vivid green eyes lending to his otherworldly beauty, but he’s seriously out of her league. When he tells her that she’s beautiful and confesses that he wants her, she can’t resist him and his passionate kiss. She unleashes her desire and seizes the moment and Lukas with both hands. But Lukas has a secret, one that will test Annelie’s love for him and threaten to tear them apart.

He’s an angel.

Annelie can’t believe it when Lukas says that their feelings for each other aren’t a sin, but she can believe his pain when he tells her the reason he’s on Earth. He is fallen, cast out of Heaven as punishment for a crime he didn’t commit. Lukas isn’t about to give up and accept his fate though. He’s determined to prove both his innocence and his love for Annelie, and to show her that the intense passion they share is real.

When Lukas and Apollyon discover who framed him, will he be able to stop them from going after Serenity and Annelie? Will he be able to protect the woman he loves and fly away with her into their forever after?

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Charisma Knight – Guest Blogger

Today I have the lovely Charisma Knight here with me on my blog, and she’s come to share a excerpt of her rather sexy Halloween story…

This post is rated over 18s only!

My Dark Lord and Master (a part of XoXo Publishing’s Halloween Volume 1 Anthology)
Ever wonder what dreams and fantasies are made of? Some believe one mirrors the other. Perhaps a fantasy is based upon a dream you had one restless night. Maybe a dream, once a fantasy has presented itself to you in the form of a half man, half beast, conjured by the darkest depths of your imagination.

Once manifestation has occurred, how will you react when your dark Lord and Master projects you into his domain, placing his mark upon you for all eternity? When it is all said and done, would you regret the strong power of imagination?

Excerpt:
I imagine your voice as a sexy whisper, with heated breath against my neck as you ask, “Will you be my submissive?”

“Oh, fuck yeah!” I scream in my aroused state.

Now I have totally relinquished any self-control I thought I possessed, early on before I came to know you in this way. Is it so easy to believe how this fierce imagination of mine has me panting with desire for you? This hellish infatuation has entombed my mortal soul.

“Yes, I will be your submissive, Master,” I say, with a quivering voice. “Take these cuffs and chains, and bind me. Spread me wide on your bed, and take it all—take everything I offer so freely to you, for in these brief moments during the day, I belong to you.”

“Are you sure?” You ask, as lust fills your eyes. “For once we travel down this path, there is no return. Do you understand love?”

“Yes, my dark, handsome master from across the sea. Take me, I beg of thee, take me and do what you will.”

I close my eyes and wish—wish, pray, and plead until my dark master appears to me, not just as a spirit but as a flesh and blood man. The power of my darkest desires is enough to summon him.

Now, you are here and you tower above me. Without a word you take me in your strong embrace, carrying me a thousand miles from my homeland. Over the shores made of gold and sea of turquoise blue, we fly over the Serbian mountains. My life flashes before my eyes, and for now, we are the only beings existing in this world.

My eyes close long enough to be surprised when I open them again in time to see a huge four-post bed. Gently, you lay me onto the soft fur pelts.

I want to escape, but I don’t ever want be free and I know I have given my consent to anything my master wishes to do to me. You give me a smile, exciting me while turning my blood ice cold. I shudder as your large hands pull at the sheer silk fabric of my dress and within seconds you have stripped me naked before you.

I quiver with desire as you run your fingers over my stiff nipples and twist each one. God, you know I want you to suck on them and you don’t disappoint, you never do.

Moans escape my lips as your mouth and teeth explore my diamond hard nubs. You run a finger across my labia and your dark smile deepens at the wetness you have provoked.

With an urgent move, you push me back onto the bed. My breathing is shallow and erratic. From nowhere you produce a length of thick black rope and I struggle in vain, even though I know you are too strong and my resistance would be for naught.

Laughing, a deep, dark laugh, you spread me wide on the bed so I’m helpless and vulnerable to you.

“Master, please.” The words are mangled, and anticipation possesses me like a dark veil. I grit my teeth and my breathing is labored as I feel the heat of your hands.

“There will be no begging tonight. You are mine, at last.” A maniacal laugh fills me with dread, and a strong desire I cannot comprehend. My eyes are glued to you as you begin to undress.

“Master.” I murmur once more.

You place a lone finger against sensuous lips and say; “Shhh. Speak no more woman.” A shiver runs down my spine, because I could have sworn I saw flames dancing in your dark eyes.

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Charisma Knight lives in the Maryland area with her darling daughters and her overactive imagination. Her love for vampires prompted her to pursue writing in March 2009.

Vampires are her first love. Werewolves, ghosts, and dragons follow close behind. She writes of old or “cursed” souls who are reincarnated over the sands of time. Quite often these souls must atone for past sins they care not to remember before fulfilling their destinies.

Her stories contain an erotic wild edge with a little fantasy sprinkled within. On occasion, one will discover some stories deal with real life situations. There are certain trials and tribulations everyone faces while walking down that cobblestone road called life. Charisma enjoys writing about how her characters triumph over the hurdles in their existence.

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