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Forbidden Blood – Vampire romance – edits

This week was spent mostly recovering from a cold that I picked up last week, when I was on holiday time from work, and editing my vampire romance novel, Forbidden Blood. I’m feeling much better now but still a little throaty at times. Work has been very stressful this week so writing has been a glorious escape from that.

I’ve made it a good distance into the second draft of Forbidden Blood. It’s slow progress to go through a 121,000 word story and tighten it all. So far, I’ve brought it down to around 117,000 words, which is pretty good, and I’m on target for it to end up around the 110,000 word mark, which should give it a better chance with literary agents looking for paranormal / vampire romance fiction. Husband dearest keeps saying that I’m hacking my story but I gently argue that it isn’t hacking. All I’m doing it clearing out the clutter and sharpening the sentences so it reads better and the writing is far tighter. I can get repetitive at times, and usually catch it during this stage, which is why I cut back on so many words.

The initial read through on paper, acting as a reader not an editor or author, really helps spot the repetition and things that need improvement. Thankfully with this one there’s not too much that needs to be deeply addressed. It’s mostly things like improving scenes and clarifying and writing parts a little tighter.

For once, I’m actually enjoying editing. I usually approach these things with much depression and complete lack of enthusiasm, but it’s fun to watch the word count go down and to be strict.

I think over the five years that I have been writing original fiction, I have slowly become far more professional in my approach to not only writing but editing too. I can now accept that it’s a very necessary part of writing and I won’t let anyone see a story that is only in first draft really, at least no in its entirety. My friend Maria gets snippets from time to time when I’m uncertain of things or we’re sharing stuff. I am usually happy with a first draft, but I write it so fast that I need to give it a hard going over when I’m doing the second draft.

Still, I’m a week in, and over 100 pages out of 270 edited. I should have this done in around four week I think, so three weeks from now.

I’m redesigning my site at the moment, so I’d better get back to that. On an aside, I went to see Alice in Wonderland in 3D yesterday with the hubby and that was really good. I’d definitely buy it on DVD. The 3D wasn’t as impressive as it was on Avatar though. Really expensive to see it too. Almost 20 quid!

I also watched Underworld: Rise of the Lycans last night on Sky and I have to say it didn’t exactly blow me away. You can tell it’s a cheap take on the other two Underworld films. Not enough vampire-ness even when they were surrounded by them. I mostly sat there thinking a lot of my stories would make far better films.

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Her Dark Angel – angel / witch romance novella

Well, I finished writing Her Dark Angel in first draft this week. In the end, it turned out to be 28000 words, which is a pretty respectable length for a good quick read. It was nice writing something that was pretty much unplanned and which I hadn’t even thought of before last week. Funny when that happens. I have novels waiting to be written, and there’s always something that jumps the queue.

Speaking of queue jumpers. Forbidden Blood second draft is underway. I had Wednesday-Friday off this week to use up some remaining holiday and managed to not only get sick on Tuesday afternoon, as though in preparation for time off, but have managed to completely work through my holiday days too. I’m not sure what that says about me. I take time off work to do my other job. Lol. Hubby says that I need to remember how to have fun. There was a time when I was happy to spend a whole day playing PlayStation and was happy at the end of it. I’ve completely forgotten how to do nothing and be happy with it. If I spend a day like that now, I feel as though I’ve wasted it. Enough of life stuff, back to Forbidden Blood.

I read it on paper, as a reader, as I always do when starting an edit, on Wednesday and Thursday morning, and it’s actually in better nick than I had expected it to be. There’s a few things to address, but nothing major, not like I sometimes get with stories (Love Immortal, you know I’m talking about you… and you Winter’s Kiss… and Cabin Fever!).

I don’t think it will take me too long to do the second draft on it. I need to do my usual process but that shouldn’t take me more than a few weeks, and then I can get on with my other stories, and then decide what to do with them!

Her Dark Angel is probably going to be released through Alinar Publishing. It has been a while since I had a paid for release there, and I really need to keep my name out there. Everyone has come back with very nice comments about the cover that I’ve made. I’d like to get it out soonish but edits take time and I can’t rush them. People have asked about the summary and when they can read it, but I have none of that side of stuff done yet. I’ve only just written it! I hope that I’ll be able to get the story released this summer.

I have a couple of other novellas to write too. One is a werewolf/vampire romance, and the other is vampire/vampire romance. Both of them are Vampires Realm stories.

I need to go and plan out my writing schedule and see how punishing it will be!

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Free paranormal / vampire romance novel – chapter 12 posted!

I have posted chapter 12 of my free paranormal / vampire romance novel, Of Blood and Snow.

Oh, the romance! It’s another chapter which will have you all smiling by the end of it and likely sighing to yourself with a little “Oh, Corazon.” and clutching your hands to your chest in a very girlish fashion (unless you’re a man… although you might love Corazon too… he’s a hottie after all). Okay, a little over-dramatic, but it’s a sweet sucker of a chapter and I’m sure you’ll all like it.

Read the story now: http://www.bit.ly/cxaTGh

Happy Reading!

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Heart of Darkness – vampire romance novel complete in first draft – and Her Dark Angel

Well, I finished writing the first draft of my latest vampire romance novel, Heart of Darkness, this week. I finished it on Wednesday and it’s complete at 124,546 words, written in 3.5 weeks! That’s pretty good going I think. I’ve had a good time writing it and although I had a moment in the third week where I was stuttering a bit, and I had to push myself in the final week to get it finished, I’m rather happy with the outcome.

I don’t think I’ll be killing myself to get my next novel written so quickly, although I have freed up some time in which I decided to write a couple of the short stories for my A Day In The Life series of free ebooks, and I’ve even decided to write a rather steamy paranormal romance novella too which I’m burning through right now. I can hopefully find some time to write another few paranormal romance stories which I have ideas for, all shorts or novellas, in between editing my three bigger stories.

I wrote the A Day In The Life story for Lilith, from Seventh Circle, and Balt, from Sons of Lyra: Slave Princess, which are both due out over summer. Both of them turned out at 3000 words. The whole series is made up of free ebooks that are around that length or up to 4000 or so. I’m going to be proofing the stories for Kim, from In Heat, and Valentine, from the Prophecy Trilogy and Spellbound, tomorrow.

I’m going to start on the second draft of Forbidden Blood on Wednesday this week when I have some holiday time for a few days. The usual trick to start with, giving it a good read through on paper pretending to be just a reader and making notes on the obvious things to fix. I’ve allocated four weeks to do the second draft, which should be enough time based on how long it’s taken me to do second drafts on previous novels of similar length. Besides, this one is in pretty good shape already and there’s only a few things that I know I might want to fix or improve, besides the usual of fight scenes, death scenes and love scenes.

As for the new erotica paranormal romance novella I’m writing, that’s quite fun right now and I’m flying through it with almost 9000 words written for it only yesterday. I haven’t really planned this one, which is unusual for me. I only have a few scraps of notes for it which I’m working from and giving my muse free leave with the rest. I should have it done by Tuesday night though so I don’t impact on my second draft of Forbidden Blood. This story is a new sub-genre of paranormal romance for me. Her Dark Angel features a witch for a heroine and an angel for the hero. It’s going to be the same sort of heat level as my In Heat stories, with plenty of love scenes and passion, and a deep attraction between the hero and heroine. I can’t really say much about it without giving it all away! I’ve written angels before in Seventh Circle, both the good sort and the sort that have been corrupted, and I enjoy spinning a new take on them, and I’ll be doing the same with this one, only this time he’s the hero!

I’m over my parents right now gearing up for a birthday party and my father, with the announcement “This will get you going” handed me a section of The Guardian with its Ten Rules For Writers… Gee thanks. At least this time it’s only best selling authors giving their top ten tips for writing, and I definitely live by all of Neil Gaiman’s ones already. Last time it was a how to write type thing.

Update next week with progress on Her Dark Angel.

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Heart of Darkness – third week of writing new vampire romance novel

Writing on my new vampire romance novel, Heart of Darkness, was much slower this week, or at least it felt that way. It was definitely more of an effort. I often hit a patch when writing a story where I feel as though it’s complete rubbish, or isn’t working, or I’m repeating myself, or some other negative vibe. I think all authors do it.

My usual trick is to read back over the story I’ve written so far and prove to myself that it’s fine, and all easy to fix if there are issues. The trouble is, this vibe hit me at 90,000 words. Now, I’m not going to take a week off schedule just to get over my usual writing jitters. Instead I just pushed on through and eventually found my flow again. The positive thing to come out of this week was that at the end of it my fingers weren’t ready to fall off.

I had actually ended up writing another 37000 words, but without the pain and insane rush!

So, the story is coming along well and we’re definitely into that wonderful downhill slide now. I have 3.5 chapters left to write, including one love scene and one major fight scene. Both of those are going to take effort, but I can’t see it taking me the whole of next week to write them, which means that by Wednesday, Heart of Darkness is likely to be finished in first draft!

At the end of last week I had reached 72200 words roughly and I had planned to write another standard 30000 words this week. If I could write 37000 words instead, then that was going to add to my fantastic feeling that I’ve had with this story and propel me towards the potential of writing a 120,000 word novel in only 3.5 weeks.

At the end of this week, the word count now stands at 109051, which is almost 37000 words this week. That’s rather exciting for me considering that I felt as though I was going at a snail’s pace this week and that I wasn’t going to reach 30000 let alone 37000!

The story will be all wrapped up around the 125-130,000 word mark and then I’ll set it aside and start the second draft on Forbidden Blood.

In other writing news, Hades’ Boys are making their voices known again and I’ve been writing down notes for their stories and the world it will be set in. I’m excited about them crowing for attention again as they’ve been away a while.

I’m also choosing to ignore the demands of other vampires who want their stories written and just noting down what they’ve been telling me about them and their stories for future writing.

I really have to concentrate on the second drafts of these three paranormal romance novels and planning the Hades’ Boys series and then I can think about writing new stories. It’s going to be tough and something is bound to test me and make me write when I should be editing, but until that happens, I intend to be strong and focused! I can get my quick writing jollies from the A Day in the Life series as I still need to write another five of those this year.

Off to whip up some blurbs for the next two A Day in the Life stories and then it’s domestic goddess time and after that some much needed PS3 time!

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Free vampire romance story – Of Blood and Snow – Chapter 10 posted!

Happy Valentine’s Day…

It just happens that the chapter of my free vampire romance story, Of Blood & Snow, that I’ve posted this weekend is fitting for the occasion!

It could be the moment that you’ve been waiting for! Judging by all the wonderful comments I’ve been receiving about my free vampire romance story, you’re loving it and you’ve been waiting impatiently for this to happen… of course, it can’t be all hearts and flowers, right?

Read it now >

Happy reading everyone!

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Heart of Darkness – second week of writing new vampire romance novel

Week 2 of writing my latest vampire romance novel, Heart of Darkness, is now complete and I managed to make another giant leap towards getting this story finished in what has to be record time for me.

I had reached around 36500 words at the end of last week, which was fantastic progress in my first week and 6000 words better that I had anticipated. This week the total so far has risen by yet another 36000 words, and now it stands at 72218. I had hoped to write 30000 words this week, so writing another 6000 on top is wonderful and really gives me confidence that I can probably have the first draft on this done by the end of next week/early the week after. I would be amazed if I manage to finish what will likely be a 120,000 word first draft of this vampire romance novel in only 3 weeks. That would be too extraordinary.

The darling husband told me not to rush, because surely it won’t be as good. I told him that I’m not rushing, I’m just writing at the speed my heart, mind and fingers long to go with this story. Because I have it all plotted out, scenes planned, etc, it means I can go quickly on it without fear of it being rubbish, because I know what I have is good. I just need to take what I’ve written as notes and make it into a story, and add in the parts which I didn’t plan out. I’m confident that the first draft of the story will be good, with only minor things to smooth out plot-wise and character-wise.

I did have to stop myself from writing on Thursday evening on the train home. I had accumulated 8000 words that day and my fingers were aching so much that I couldn’t type even when I really wanted to keep going. My fingers are an important part of my toolset though and I have to give them the break they need in order to stop them from wearing out!

I hit the middle section earlier in the week, which saw me slow down a bit too. I had to pause and think and then push on through. Thankfully I have found my flow again with the story and we’re dashing on. A lot has happened and we’re on the cusp of the heroine and hero finally getting together and surrendering to their love. It’s been a rocky road for these two, and there are still troubled times ahead for them to get through before the end of the book.

Arms are tired again from writing this looong blog post so I need a break. Here’s to another 30000 words next week. I don’t think I’ll push myself. If I manage 36000 again, I’ll be very excited when I post my week 3 catch up!

Cuppa tea time.

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Of Blood and Snow – Free Vampire Romance Novel – chapter 9 posted!

Well, the response to chapter 8 was incredible and a big thank you to everyone who took the time to leave me a comment on it. I really appreciate every single one and it’s wonderful to know that you’re all enjoying the story. Of course, it helps that chapter 8 was rather romantic, and I do wonder what the response will be to the coming chapters. Oh well, nothing for it but to post them and see!

I have posted chapter 9 now of this free paranormal/vampire romance story. The course of true love never did run smoothly…

Read it now >

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Heart of Darkness – first week of writing new vampire romance novel

Well, the first week of writing Heart of Darkness is over and if you follow my Twitter then you already know that I made good progress. I had hoped to reach 30,000 words in this first week, so at least 1/4 of the book written, and actually managed to make it to 36,424 words thanks to some extra time because of football (ah, that’s a good pun) and the occasional wait for a later train back from work in London.

I’m giving myself a big old pat on the back for ending the week 6,424 words up. That’s a whole day of writing shaved off the schedule, and not bad considering that I only get an average of 3.5 hours to write a day (1 hour train journey to work, 30 minutes before work, lunch, and then 1 hour train journey home). I write fast, and many of you know what a prolific and focused writer I am when I get going.

I doubt that I will be able to manage another 36,000 words next week, but it’s possible because my husband is out on Wednesday evening. I might go for a jog and then do some writing.

Still unsure about how long it will be at the end of the first draft. I have 29 chapters plotted out, which should be around 120,000 words for me, but some of my chapters have been quite short so far. I’m at the start of writing chapter 12 now. So, it could be 90,000 words, it could be 120,000 words… but I sense some longer chapters coming soon, and I have some stuff to layer in to the previous ones. I’m still thinking 120,000.

I’m really enjoying writing this story though and can’t wait to get going on it again. I was slow with it at the start, probably because I’d planned it so thoroughly that the initial excitement had worn off and also that I was having doubts about how well I was going to be able to write it. Once I found my flow though, and realised that whatever I wrote, I could always improve it if I didn’t like it, I was flying!

So, here’s to next week. I’ll try to post a catch up at some point but I’m sure you’ll forgive me if it means I write another 500 words rather than blogged.

happy reading!

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Werewolf romance ebook and vampire romance ebook now available on Amazon!

Two more of my short paranormal romance ebooks, this time a werewolf romance and a vampire romance, are available now on Amazon Kindle.

Embracing the Wolf
Kat, a hunter with the Werewolf Control Forces, fled her alpha werewolf lover, Amon, when he told her that she too had the gene in her blood and would one day mature into a werewolf–into his mate. Four years on, Kat has now matured. Each night…
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A Promise of Passion
A dark, sensual and action packed story of two hearts, united in their passion and desire, but divided by their blood, A Promise of Passion is guaranteed to get your heart racing. Alicia is a vampire hunter, unable to find a man strong enough to…
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Happy reading!

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