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Heart of Darkness – vampire romance novel complete in first draft – and Her Dark Angel

Well, I finished writing the first draft of my latest vampire romance novel, Heart of Darkness, this week. I finished it on Wednesday and it’s complete at 124,546 words, written in 3.5 weeks! That’s pretty good going I think. I’ve had a good time writing it and although I had a moment in the third week where I was stuttering a bit, and I had to push myself in the final week to get it finished, I’m rather happy with the outcome.

I don’t think I’ll be killing myself to get my next novel written so quickly, although I have freed up some time in which I decided to write a couple of the short stories for my A Day In The Life series of free ebooks, and I’ve even decided to write a rather steamy paranormal romance novella too which I’m burning through right now. I can hopefully find some time to write another few paranormal romance stories which I have ideas for, all shorts or novellas, in between editing my three bigger stories.

I wrote the A Day In The Life story for Lilith, from Seventh Circle, and Balt, from Sons of Lyra: Slave Princess, which are both due out over summer. Both of them turned out at 3000 words. The whole series is made up of free ebooks that are around that length or up to 4000 or so. I’m going to be proofing the stories for Kim, from In Heat, and Valentine, from the Prophecy Trilogy and Spellbound, tomorrow.

I’m going to start on the second draft of Forbidden Blood on Wednesday this week when I have some holiday time for a few days. The usual trick to start with, giving it a good read through on paper pretending to be just a reader and making notes on the obvious things to fix. I’ve allocated four weeks to do the second draft, which should be enough time based on how long it’s taken me to do second drafts on previous novels of similar length. Besides, this one is in pretty good shape already and there’s only a few things that I know I might want to fix or improve, besides the usual of fight scenes, death scenes and love scenes.

As for the new erotica paranormal romance novella I’m writing, that’s quite fun right now and I’m flying through it with almost 9000 words written for it only yesterday. I haven’t really planned this one, which is unusual for me. I only have a few scraps of notes for it which I’m working from and giving my muse free leave with the rest. I should have it done by Tuesday night though so I don’t impact on my second draft of Forbidden Blood. This story is a new sub-genre of paranormal romance for me. Her Dark Angel features a witch for a heroine and an angel for the hero. It’s going to be the same sort of heat level as my In Heat stories, with plenty of love scenes and passion, and a deep attraction between the hero and heroine. I can’t really say much about it without giving it all away! I’ve written angels before in Seventh Circle, both the good sort and the sort that have been corrupted, and I enjoy spinning a new take on them, and I’ll be doing the same with this one, only this time he’s the hero!

I’m over my parents right now gearing up for a birthday party and my father, with the announcement “This will get you going” handed me a section of The Guardian with its Ten Rules For Writers… Gee thanks. At least this time it’s only best selling authors giving their top ten tips for writing, and I definitely live by all of Neil Gaiman’s ones already. Last time it was a how to write type thing.

Update next week with progress on Her Dark Angel.

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Heart of Darkness – third week of writing new vampire romance novel

Writing on my new vampire romance novel, Heart of Darkness, was much slower this week, or at least it felt that way. It was definitely more of an effort. I often hit a patch when writing a story where I feel as though it’s complete rubbish, or isn’t working, or I’m repeating myself, or some other negative vibe. I think all authors do it.

My usual trick is to read back over the story I’ve written so far and prove to myself that it’s fine, and all easy to fix if there are issues. The trouble is, this vibe hit me at 90,000 words. Now, I’m not going to take a week off schedule just to get over my usual writing jitters. Instead I just pushed on through and eventually found my flow again. The positive thing to come out of this week was that at the end of it my fingers weren’t ready to fall off.

I had actually ended up writing another 37000 words, but without the pain and insane rush!

So, the story is coming along well and we’re definitely into that wonderful downhill slide now. I have 3.5 chapters left to write, including one love scene and one major fight scene. Both of those are going to take effort, but I can’t see it taking me the whole of next week to write them, which means that by Wednesday, Heart of Darkness is likely to be finished in first draft!

At the end of last week I had reached 72200 words roughly and I had planned to write another standard 30000 words this week. If I could write 37000 words instead, then that was going to add to my fantastic feeling that I’ve had with this story and propel me towards the potential of writing a 120,000 word novel in only 3.5 weeks.

At the end of this week, the word count now stands at 109051, which is almost 37000 words this week. That’s rather exciting for me considering that I felt as though I was going at a snail’s pace this week and that I wasn’t going to reach 30000 let alone 37000!

The story will be all wrapped up around the 125-130,000 word mark and then I’ll set it aside and start the second draft on Forbidden Blood.

In other writing news, Hades’ Boys are making their voices known again and I’ve been writing down notes for their stories and the world it will be set in. I’m excited about them crowing for attention again as they’ve been away a while.

I’m also choosing to ignore the demands of other vampires who want their stories written and just noting down what they’ve been telling me about them and their stories for future writing.

I really have to concentrate on the second drafts of these three paranormal romance novels and planning the Hades’ Boys series and then I can think about writing new stories. It’s going to be tough and something is bound to test me and make me write when I should be editing, but until that happens, I intend to be strong and focused! I can get my quick writing jollies from the A Day in the Life series as I still need to write another five of those this year.

Off to whip up some blurbs for the next two A Day in the Life stories and then it’s domestic goddess time and after that some much needed PS3 time!

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Heart of Darkness – the soundtrack!

I was procrastinating on Saturday and decided to write up a soundtrack for Heart of Darkness. I always write to music, choosing specific songs for certain scenes, so this is just an extension of that. Here’s my soundtrack for this vampire romance novel:

Heart of Darkness
1. Never Say Never – The Fray
2. Make Me Believe – Tupelo Honey
3. It’s Not Over – Daughtry
4. Alibis – Marianas Trench
5. Endlessly – Green River Ordinance
6. Not Alone – Tupelo Honey
7. Fallen – Sarah McLachlan
8. Everything – Lifehouse
9. Moment – Aiden
10. Invincible – Chantal Kreviazuk
11. You and Me – Lifehouse
12. If You Want Me – One Less Reason
13. Right Here – Staind
14. Night of the Hunter – 30 Seconds to Mars
15. From This Fall – 7 Days Away
16. Heavenly Answer – BulletProof Messenger

It was a bit longer than the other two soundtracks I’ve devised for Love Immortal and Forbidden Blood, but I now have all three of them made up as playlists on my iPod and computer. Rocks. I’ll post my soundtracks for the other two soon.

What do you think? Good choices?

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Heart of Darkness – second week of writing new vampire romance novel

Week 2 of writing my latest vampire romance novel, Heart of Darkness, is now complete and I managed to make another giant leap towards getting this story finished in what has to be record time for me.

I had reached around 36500 words at the end of last week, which was fantastic progress in my first week and 6000 words better that I had anticipated. This week the total so far has risen by yet another 36000 words, and now it stands at 72218. I had hoped to write 30000 words this week, so writing another 6000 on top is wonderful and really gives me confidence that I can probably have the first draft on this done by the end of next week/early the week after. I would be amazed if I manage to finish what will likely be a 120,000 word first draft of this vampire romance novel in only 3 weeks. That would be too extraordinary.

The darling husband told me not to rush, because surely it won’t be as good. I told him that I’m not rushing, I’m just writing at the speed my heart, mind and fingers long to go with this story. Because I have it all plotted out, scenes planned, etc, it means I can go quickly on it without fear of it being rubbish, because I know what I have is good. I just need to take what I’ve written as notes and make it into a story, and add in the parts which I didn’t plan out. I’m confident that the first draft of the story will be good, with only minor things to smooth out plot-wise and character-wise.

I did have to stop myself from writing on Thursday evening on the train home. I had accumulated 8000 words that day and my fingers were aching so much that I couldn’t type even when I really wanted to keep going. My fingers are an important part of my toolset though and I have to give them the break they need in order to stop them from wearing out!

I hit the middle section earlier in the week, which saw me slow down a bit too. I had to pause and think and then push on through. Thankfully I have found my flow again with the story and we’re dashing on. A lot has happened and we’re on the cusp of the heroine and hero finally getting together and surrendering to their love. It’s been a rocky road for these two, and there are still troubled times ahead for them to get through before the end of the book.

Arms are tired again from writing this looong blog post so I need a break. Here’s to another 30000 words next week. I don’t think I’ll push myself. If I manage 36000 again, I’ll be very excited when I post my week 3 catch up!

Cuppa tea time.

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Heart of Darkness – first week of writing new vampire romance novel

Well, the first week of writing Heart of Darkness is over and if you follow my Twitter then you already know that I made good progress. I had hoped to reach 30,000 words in this first week, so at least 1/4 of the book written, and actually managed to make it to 36,424 words thanks to some extra time because of football (ah, that’s a good pun) and the occasional wait for a later train back from work in London.

I’m giving myself a big old pat on the back for ending the week 6,424 words up. That’s a whole day of writing shaved off the schedule, and not bad considering that I only get an average of 3.5 hours to write a day (1 hour train journey to work, 30 minutes before work, lunch, and then 1 hour train journey home). I write fast, and many of you know what a prolific and focused writer I am when I get going.

I doubt that I will be able to manage another 36,000 words next week, but it’s possible because my husband is out on Wednesday evening. I might go for a jog and then do some writing.

Still unsure about how long it will be at the end of the first draft. I have 29 chapters plotted out, which should be around 120,000 words for me, but some of my chapters have been quite short so far. I’m at the start of writing chapter 12 now. So, it could be 90,000 words, it could be 120,000 words… but I sense some longer chapters coming soon, and I have some stuff to layer in to the previous ones. I’m still thinking 120,000.

I’m really enjoying writing this story though and can’t wait to get going on it again. I was slow with it at the start, probably because I’d planned it so thoroughly that the initial excitement had worn off and also that I was having doubts about how well I was going to be able to write it. Once I found my flow though, and realised that whatever I wrote, I could always improve it if I didn’t like it, I was flying!

So, here’s to next week. I’ll try to post a catch up at some point but I’m sure you’ll forgive me if it means I write another 500 words rather than blogged.

happy reading!

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Like Pride & Prejudice with vampires

I was thinking about Heart of Darkness yesterday morning on the way to work, and realised that it’s like Pride and Prejudice but with vampires. He’s a haughty, proud noble who has slightly backwards attitude towards women and sees the heroine as something to be won, something to just reach out and take, because he’s been out of society for so long tracking vampire hunters that he hasn’t quite realised that women in this century are a bit more independent. She’s a feisty, strong woman who isn’t about to let any man, not even a prince, treat her like an object, and she certainly doesn’t need protecting. She’s always stood on her own two feet and never relied on anyone. If he wants her, he’s going to have to clean up his act and take the right approach. Of course, it takes her refusing his advances several times for him to realise that he’s taking the wrong approach entirely and needs to take a new tack with her! Just the sort of story I like, and with an added level of darkness that I think will make it plenty different from every other vampire romance book out there.

I do like to be different with my stories, and I think it really shows in the comments I’ve had with my Seventh Circle and Love Immortal posting on Authonomy.com. People are commenting on how refreshing it is to have such a different vampire story on the site.

Since the advent of 2009, and the rise of the vampires again in books and movies, I’ve been worried that agents and publishers will be sick of vampire romance or paranormal romance novels, and that I won’t stand a chance because everyone and their dog is trying to get in on an already crowded market. But seeing the posts from other authors and hearing the feedback from my readers, gives me confidence that my books are different from every other story out there. They’re a new take, a new approach, and something I truly believe that readers will adore in this time of same-old, same-old. In this market, if it isn’t different, it’s dead.

I’ve always tried to stand out and give readers something new, and I think my stories do that, and judging by the number of you wonderful readers that follow my stories and send me emails about them, you think they’re new and different too.

I’ve finished planning Heart of Darkness now, and I’ll begin writing it on Monday. It will probably take me 5 weeks to write during my journeys to / from work and lunches, but I might get it done quicker. My novels these days are more complicated, which means longer. This one looks as though it’s going to be 120,000 words, like Forbidden Blood was in first draft!

Happy reading everyone!

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Plot outlines, Synopses and PlayStation 3

It’s been a busy week. The snow has finally gone. It rained heavily on Friday and cleared most of it away. I’ve spent my writing time this week, on my journey to/from work and at lunch, working on my A Day in the Life series, and Heart of Darkness. I’m really enjoying getting the notes together for Heart of Darkness.

The story is predominantly the hero’s, and I do like writing that type of stories. I like writing the sort where the heroine is the central focus, and the story is primarily about her, but there’s something refreshing about writing something in which the hero has more at stake. Seventh Circle was the hero’s story, as was Killing Game, and a few others that I’ve written. It’s nice to have a change and I think it will be different to write Heart of Darkness. The hero has a lot at stake, his life actually, and it will be the heroine who will save him. I love that sort of twist too. Where the heroine is the one having to do the real saving. Sure, the hero will get her out of some scrapes and things, but she’s the one who will in the end save him from some terrible fate.

I’ve been getting all my written-on-paper notes together for Heart of Darkness, and writing up the plot outline on my shiny new netbook. It’s rather handy to have. It’s so much lighter to carry around than my laptop, even though my laptop is quite small and light, and the battery lasts forever, so I can type as much as I like without a problem. I was writing out my plot outline into a word document, and realised I could add in my random bits of notes straight into the outline, and other character stuff that I had written down. It’s so nice to be able to compile it all into one linear outline. Normally I have my scribbled down outline, and then number all my scene notes that are written on paper, and when I write the story with the outline and notes, I have to keep hopping between the outline and the numbered note it’s referring to. Now, I have my outline in a word doc (yay) and have added in the small notes and stuff to it, and will still have the numbered scene notes, because it’s a waste of time to write ALL of them up as there’s probably almost fifty A5 pages of them. But, with my next story, I’ll be able to just write all those scene notes on my netbook/laptop and then work them into the plot outline… so not more switching between the outline and the scene notes. Double yay. Of course, I’ll have to print it out to work from because I don’t like to have to switch windows on my computer. I prefer to just look at the notes beside me and touch-type the story on the computer.

Reading that back, it seems like a very sad thing to be so excited about.

I’m hoping to get everything finished for Heart of Darkness soon. I keep thinking I’m close but then I remember things like I have to check over my character sketches/bio for information to work into the story, and draw out the layouts of the places we visit more than once, and write out the decor for them. Yes, I do like to get so in depth. Continuity is important and it’s easier done when you have a layout of the building/rooms, and notes about what furniture they have, colours of fabrics, walls, etc.

I’ve also finished with the synopses for Love Immortal. I read the one page synopsis and three page synopsis out loud yesterday to make sure they’re perfect, and read the five page synopsis this morning. I’ve added in any changes to the word documents now and the only thing left to do is give them a proof. I’m really glad that they turned out so good without me having to write thirty drafts and versions to try and get one that really worked.

I’d better go. I was up until almost 2am last night partying with my family for my neice’s (2) birthday and I’m still over my folks’ house. Got to drag the husband out of bed and get home. I woke up early so I could get my five page synopsis read and some work done before going home… and possibly playing PlayStation. Well, I can’t be all work and no play!

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Romance novels, editing, writing and synopses! Oh My!

I’m in a plotting and planning mood right now. I think it’s a vague attempt to escape writing synopses for Love Immortal. It has been quite productive. I’ve plotted five of my A Day in the Life series short romance stories and have written three of them. I’m planning to write eight of them this year and have chosen which characters will feature. I have to plot another three, but it shouldn’t be too difficult since they’re only 4000 word scenes.

I did figure out my rough schedule for the year to see what it was going to look like. Conclusion: Frightening.

I will write the first draft of Heart of Darkness in February, and after that I need to schedule in two more drafts each on Heart of Darkness, Forbidden Blood and Ascension. And after that I need to proof all three, and write their synopses, etc. When I totted this up on a calendar, allowing for writing, editing and proofing my A Day in the Life stories too, it turns out that to do everything minus the synopses will take me until the end of September. Blech.

I hate it when I figure things out and it basically says – yes, you’re going to be editing, editing and editing until September! Congratulations! Of course, another story will come along and bump that date a bit because I’ll write it in some fevered attempt to escape editing hell. I think it’s a special circle of Hell reserved for writers… or at least writers who aren’t lazy and do edit and do several drafts on their stories to perfect them.

Of course, there’s only one thing for it. I’ll just have to get my head down and get on with it. I’m not going to rush things though. I like to be thorough with my writing and do things properly. If I get my head down I should be able to shave some time off my predicted timescales. A few days off each soon adds up when you’re talking second and third drafts on three novels. If I manage to get three days off each, I claw back a couple of weeks working time. It doesn’t sound like much, but I could probably write 40,000 words in that time. I generally write for four days a week on my journey to and from work, and at lunch, and can usually clock up around 5000-6000 words on each day. That’s 20,000 a week. So, if I knuckle down and get on with my editing and really focus, I could save enough time to write half a novel. Yay!

I really want to get on with my Hades’ Boys series too. I need to do extensive planning on it since it’s a seven book series where the main story arc runs through them all, with each story having its own arc as well. I haven’t written anything like that before, but I have written my three book Prophecy Trilogy, so I know how much planning needs to go into it. A lot! I might start doing bits for it on weekends when I can, but I don’t usually have much spare time then.

Ah, it’s a planning, plotting, writing and editing nightmare, but I wouldn’t have it any other way. I just wish that doing second and third drafts didn’t take me as long as writing the first draft does! I could get so much more written and I’m bursting with new stories right now.

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New paranormal romance novel and the year ahead

Just before Christmas I had another new idea for a story. I didn’t put it on the backburner as it was rather persistent. I believe that I mentioned it back in December and that I was writing notes for it at the time. Well, I finished writing the bulk of the notes for it and now I just need to get them into a coherent order and complete the outline of the novel. At this point, it feels as though it’s going to be somewhere between 90-100,000 words long. That’s a good length for a paranormal romance novel. It might end up longer.

The story now has a title: Heart of Darkness. It pretty much sums up the kind of story you guys are going to get. The hero is the dark one, a little out of touch with vampire society and balancing on the knife’s edge of becoming dangerous and little more than a monster. Of course, the heroine will bring him around and enlighten him about how things are done in this century, and save him from the growing darkness within him.

I don’t often write stories where both the hero and heroine are already vampires, so it’s nice to write something different. I don’t think Love Immortal counts on that front as they’re not precisely vampires. They’re more than that, and the heroine was human at the start.

I am gravitating towards vampires again, but I don’t mind. I know the market for them is probably saturated right now but I think that something different will always stand out amongst the crowd and be noticed. I’m sure that’s the case with this story. It’s quite dark. Yes, I usually write novels and stories that are dark, but this one has a new level, a little like Forbidden Blood has.

I do get to explore their society again, and I like that. I really enjoy having to think about things such as the rules they live by, the hierarchy of their society, the roles they have and how they live in our world without being noticed. It’s fun to tinker with these things.

Besides, the other series I’ve been planning for a while now and can only refer to as Hades’ Boys for now, is non-vampire (they’re demons/gods) and something I’m definitely going to write this year. I’ve been planning this seven book series for over a year now, on and off, and it’s time I gave it some more serious thought and plotted out the rough story arc of each book, and the overall arc of all seven paranormal romance novels. Believe me, it’s not as though I haven’t given this story some serious thinking time already. I have two notebooks worth of notes on the series already, but I’m nowhere near done on figuring everything out. It’s a monster of a series and I’m gagging to get going on it. It’s going to be a challenge to get it planned out in at least skeleton form and bordering on masochistic to write them all. I just need the main overall arc decided and planned, and the first three books fleshed out. The other four can be skeletons for now, which they almost are, and I’ll work on them as I go.

Of course, I can’t start writing this novel until I get other things done. I need to write a couple of my A Day In The Life short stories first, and finish writing synopses for Love Immortal. I think I should be able to start writing it in February, after which I’m going to focus on the second draft of Forbidden Blood. I have that printed out and ready for a nice sit down with some coffee and a read through. I might get out of the house that weekend and spend the day in Starbucks somewhere, so I’m not distracted from reading it. I do get distracted when I read at home. It’ll be a Saturday so I could probably go into Oxford with my husband when he goes to work and read it in a cafe there. I think it’s very important to have a good first read through as a reader, not an editor or author. It’s mostly about the storyline, characters, and any glaring holes at that point.

The other novel that needs my attention this year is Ascension. I think the second draft on this one will take longer than the one for Forbidden Blood. There’s definitely things I would like to change or add to in Ascension. I felt that way with Love Immortal and that took me weeks to do a second and third draft on. It will probably come after I’ve done the second draft on Forbidden Blood and written another couple of A Day In The Life short stories to clear the editing fuzz from my mind.

I’m off to plan a few shorts for A Day In The Life and work out my synopsis writing/submission plan for Love Immortal. Have a great day everyone!

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