{"id":620,"date":"2010-03-21T16:03:00","date_gmt":"2010-03-21T16:03:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/?p=620"},"modified":"2010-03-21T16:03:00","modified_gmt":"2010-03-21T16:03:00","slug":"vampire-romance-and-angel-witch-romance-editing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/2010\/03\/21\/vampire-romance-and-angel-witch-romance-editing\/","title":{"rendered":"Vampire romance and Angel \/ witch romance editing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>It&#8217;s been a busy week all round for me. Work, writing and play have all been manic. Let&#8217;s start with writing first, as always&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>I finished the second draft of <b>Forbidden Blood<\/b> this week. At this point, I&#8217;m quite happy with it but I&#8217;m too close to judge whether I need to improve certain scenes as I had noted previously so I&#8217;ve decided to put it to rest for a while and then read it again before the final polish and see if it needs improvements. I cut it down quite dramatically but I&#8217;m not sure whether it will be enough to entice agents into taking me on in such a strict market for word counts. It&#8217;s now 108,000 words but that&#8217;s probably still just long enough to put a lot of agents and publishers off. The economy of word count is all very good but I think publishers need to think more about what impact it has on the story and on readers. I for one feel cheated when I pay a lot of money for a 90,000 word story and it&#8217;s just not as good as a longer version might have been. There&#8217;s only so much fat you can trim from a story before you&#8217;re cutting away the good meat of it. I feel I&#8217;ve trimmed as much as possible with <b>Forbidden Blood<\/b> and people will just have to like it or lump it. There&#8217;s no point in my ruining the story just to bring it down by a few more thousand words. If it ends up around 110,000 words, I&#8217;ll be happy. I&#8217;ve always preferred to have plenty of plot in a story, which means it&#8217;s always going to be quite long. Nothing I can do about that without compromising my style and the story.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve made a paperback version of the book now via Lulu and have shipped myself a copy. It&#8217;ll get put aside until I&#8217;m done with some other writing projects and it comes time to do the polish on it. I prefer to read it as a properly printed paperback at this stage as I notice a lot more mistakes then and I can carry it around with me far more easily. I did the same thing with <b>Love Immortal<\/b> and that worked fantastically. I took the polish copy of that (post third draft for that story) to Japan with me last November and read it on the trains and plane.<\/p>\n<p>Not sure when I&#8217;ll do the polish for <b>Forbidden Blood<\/b> yet as it&#8217;s all up in the air somewhat. I need to figure out my schedule. I spent a lunch time this week going through my calendar and what needs to be done, but then I&#8217;ve changed it all again in my head and need to update my calendar now. Typical.<\/p>\n<p>After finishing <b>Forbidden Blood<\/b>&#8216;s second draft, I printed out <b>Her Dark Angel<\/b>, my witch\/angel romance novella, and started the second draft on that. It&#8217;s written in my other style. I seem to a more fun upbeat style, a bit naughty and racy, and then my more serious side. Mostly I write in my serious side, but stories like <b>In Heat<\/b> and <b>In Heat: Mating Call <\/b>are my funner side shining through. This is like that, and so is <b>Ascension<\/b>.<\/p>\n<p>I had a gig to go to on Friday in London, so having to do a read through \/ edits on paper was a good bit of timing as I didn&#8217;t want to have my netbook with me that day. I managed to do the read through, finishing it while waiting for my husband to meet me in the Starbucks near my office in London, and today I wrote all the corrections and notes up into the word document. I should have the second draft on <b>Her Dark Angel<\/b> done by Friday this week, which means I really need to figure out what I&#8217;m doing next!<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m tempted to write another story, but I have a collection of them that need editing now and I have to do a little clearing of the backlog before I can write a new story. Reading the angel romance has the muse fired up (since he&#8217;s an angel) to write another story in the same genre, so maybe I&#8217;ll swerve away from writing the werewolf romance and vampire romance novellas I intended to get done and write another angel romance instead. I could even tie it in to <b>Her Dark Angel<\/b>&#8230; oh, the muse loves the sound of that. Cue frantic note writing! An idea has just burst into my head in a flurry of feathers!<\/p>\n<p>In other news, I&#8217;ve been battling with work recently and having a massive project to suddenly do because the people who were supposed to be doing it weren&#8217;t good enough in the end. Life has been busy too. I&#8217;ve had another infection in my dodgy left ear and now have a side-effect of the Amoxicillin I was given (little red dotty rash) so I&#8217;ve given that up. I&#8217;ve been busy in the garden too. It&#8217;s that time of year now, isn&#8217;t it? It&#8217;s getting warmer and the garden needs attention. I&#8217;ve cleaned borders and sown lots of seeds this year. I love wild flowers so it&#8217;s all poppies, cornflowers, and night scented stock going out there, plus daisies and things.<\/p>\n<p>Koyo, my cat, has brought the same baby mouse in alive twice last week but not once this week. All of the seed I put on the lawn has been eaten *sigh* by the little sod and the birds, but I still keep a watchful eye on Koyo in case she&#8217;s trying to catch the poor little thing again. I&#8217;m such a pansy when it comes to animals. I can&#8217;t kill them or let them be hurt or anything like that. I have to help them, even when it&#8217;s something like a spider or snail. Everything deserves a shot at life and I feel so sorry when snails get squished by people.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;ll be time to tackle the front garden soon. Not looking forward to that. I want to get it cleaned up before my birthday party in three weeks&#8217; time. My seedlings in the back garden will be the perfect height for small niece\/nephew feet to trample at that point! lol.<\/p>\n<p>In 10 weeks I&#8217;m off on a much needed holiday to Shanghai, Australia and Tokyo (yes, Japan again!). I cannot wait&#8230; and cannot stress that word enough. I CANNOT wait! I&#8217;m bound to be reading some of my books and editing them during the flights (there are a lot of them!) but will do my best to relax too.<\/p>\n<p>Right&#8230; off to plan that new story. I have a title too now&#8230; sometimes I love my hyperactive muse!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>It&#8217;s been a busy week all round for me. Work, writing and play have all been manic. Let&#8217;s start with writing first, as always&#8230; I finished the second draft of Forbidden Blood this week. At this point, I&#8217;m quite happy &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/2010\/03\/21\/vampire-romance-and-angel-witch-romance-editing\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[10,5,56,52,9,63,8,67,107],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-620","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-forbidden-blood","category-her-angel-series","category-her-dark-angel","category-love-immortal","category-paranormal-romance","category-urban-fantasy","category-vampire-romance","category-vampires","category-witches"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/620","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=620"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/620\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=620"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=620"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.felicityheaton.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=620"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}